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Path Laid Out

Indecision is weighing heavily on my mind An easy solution I have yet to find Looking for signs to point me to the way Growing more confused in the light of each new day Options I face, the choice is unclear Nagging pit in my stomach, panic growing near Listing pros and cons and talking it out I’m left without an answer still riddled with doubt Then I look to him please guide me for no path is clear I’ve looked at both sides now and I see heartbreak and fear Now that I have asked I await a calm, clear voice The one that will guide me into making the right choice Why is it that I always forget he is there When I am faced with obstacles sometimes I can’t hear Suddenly it comes to me the path laid out is fine I just end up kicking myself for wasting so much time

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Date: 5/6/2016 9:29:00 AM
Christine C, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:20:00 AM
Christine Costello, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*"
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Date: 2/12/2016 11:34:00 AM
beautiful....
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Date: 9/20/2014 4:05:00 PM
Nicely penned introspective write!
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Date: 9/17/2014 10:09:00 AM
So wise and beautifully penned Christine. I enjoyed reading you poem immensely.
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/17/2014 10:35:00 AM
Brenda- thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 9/14/2014 2:21:00 PM
The right path to take in life is not always clear. We can become lost and then wander for years before we find our way, sometimes.... I really enjoyed this poem that ended with a wise message. Nice rhyming in this, as well! Great work, Christine!
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/14/2014 2:53:00 PM
Kelly-thank you so much for commenting on my poem-as always the answer cam for me when i asked and waited-how I love that!!!
Date: 9/13/2014 7:14:00 PM
A fine write that asks and answers so many questions. Bravo!!
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/13/2014 7:46:00 PM
Thank you for your comment-the answer is always there if I get quiet and listen for it. Duh!!!! :-)))

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