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Along the highway, in hard, rocky, pale brown soil, wild, white lilies bloom. Bite Size Poetry No. 15 contest

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/2/2022 7:09:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, I adore your vivid and beautiful haiku. The contrasts between the lily and its surroundings is striking! Perfect title too. Your inspiring pen shines. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/2/2022 9:22:00 PM

Hi Susan my poetry sister! Thank you for stopping by with such beautiful, encouraging words. Hope all is well with you. Hugs, Jennifer

FJ Thomas

Date: 6/26/2022 12:46:00 PM

They are quite resilient aren't they. Lovely Jennifer.

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/26/2022 1:25:00 PM

Oh thank you FJ! Glad you like it!

P.M. Richter

Date: 6/5/2022 1:32:00 PM

I love this haiku :)

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/5/2022 7:25:00 PM

Thank you so much P.M.!

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/31/2021 6:51:00 AM

Back to read once again this gem...So delightful!!!

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/31/2021 6:13:00 PM

Thank you JCB! That made my day!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/25/2021 6:46:00 AM

Another fine image, Jennifer. Flowers often flourish in the most severe environment. All the best, Brian

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/25/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Brian! They sure do. I’m happy you like my haiku. Glad you stopped by.

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/24/2021 10:11:00 PM

Ohhh this is so heartwarming, I happened to witness such beauty , too in my afternoon leisure walk along the way back home.You vividly conveyed what I felt in that moment. Thank you for sharing this Jennifer. My only sister is also Jennifer. This is a fave for me!

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/25/2021 12:53:00 PM

Hi JCB! Thank you for the encouragement! I’m happy it’s a fave for you. That made my day!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/24/2021 3:47:00 AM

The beauty of nature appears in the most unexpected places... beautiful poetry haiku my dear, salute alkas

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/24/2021 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Alkas, for stopping by with and encouraging message!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/1/2021 2:27:00 PM

I have seen flowers like that, they can grow in the harshest places, just like hope~

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/1/2021 2:56:00 PM

That's exactly what I wanted to convey. Thank you for letting me know I made that happen. Yeah!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/1/2021 12:51:00 AM

Love the contrast of your Haiku.

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/1/2021 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Harry! You right good stuff yourself!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/31/2021 5:54:00 PM

Even in such an environment, beauty can be found. Nature is filled with many inspiring moments. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/31/2021 8:03:00 PM

Thank you Brandy!