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Hide me from prying gaze, tuck me in a room of black. So I won't be seen as the LEECH that I am. I cannot break the cycle, nor rise above. I am confused. What must I do to stay hidden? I need to change. I want it so bad it wrecks my brain. I clench my hands in a deathgrip, knuckles white, in desperation. WHEN WHEN WHEN? Hide me in a paper brown bag. I feel uneasy. For more please visit : picobags.co.uk

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Date: 9/7/2016 1:13:00 PM
Pico bags, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/3/2016 8:19:00 PM
Lol, this one still has me going. Great account name
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Date: 8/31/2016 12:36:00 AM
Lol...so funny, Pico Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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