Overture

gilded horizon overture of a new day the sun awakens

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/26/2015 4:23:00 PM

This is such a lovely haiku with awesome imagery! I love it! Warmest regards. Pandita

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/29/2015 12:16:00 PM

Marvelous phrasing and imagery in true HAIKU structure... an uplifting piece for the day's beginning. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Md Johnson
Date: 6/9/2015 11:07:00 AM

Keith, again another nice compliment from you. It pleases me that you felt uplifted from reading this haiku. Best wishes.

Skat A

Date: 5/17/2015 9:22:00 AM

Michael, stunned by the imagery. One day I wish to gaze into this horizon.. Forever *SKAT*

Md Johnson
Date: 5/17/2015 7:00:00 PM

Most days I do...Thank you for your visit.

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/7/2015 7:32:00 PM

Another delightful 'ku from you, Michael. :)

Md Johnson
Date: 5/14/2015 10:14:00 PM

I appreciate your kind comment.