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I sat alone by the sea when a snail waved to me. She politely asked “Is this seat free?” “Why yes,” I said, “ certainly.” “I've traveled forth all lifelong seeking somewhere to belong. I've sought wide and sought long for a place to sing my song." We sat a while companionably and watched the waves absently. When I again glanced amicably, her abandoned shell lay silently. Holding her empty shell to my ear. I heard her message most sincere Sounds of the sea resounded clear – "Thanks to you, I sing my song here!"

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Date: 4/19/2023 10:22:00 AM
Oh, Linda! I love your sweet story! Congratulations on your big win!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 2:27:00 PM
Hi Ann. I'm glad you enjoyed this little whimsy :) Thank you! :)
Date: 4/18/2023 12:30:00 PM
Linda, what a magical story! This left me with a heartfelt aaah! Wonderfully creative for children of all ages!!! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 1:55:00 PM
Hi dear Sam. Thank you for your encouraging and supportive words! A fun write for me. :)
Date: 4/17/2023 12:43:00 PM
Such a beautiful verse, you made me be the one sitting on the sand picking up his shell. Congratulations on your win very well deserved
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/17/2023 1:51:00 PM
You are very kind Eve. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)
Date: 4/17/2023 2:00:00 AM
ah, this is so so precious, what an amazing visitor this was. You get an A for a top notch idea, Congrats my friend !
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/17/2023 6:14:00 AM
Hello my dear Vie. Thank you for your supportive words! :) Linda Alice
Date: 4/16/2023 2:46:00 PM
Congrats on the win Linda. A brilliant poem, true to the familiar Linda Alice Fowler style. Superb poetry, that leaves you with a smile.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/16/2023 4:01:00 PM
You flatter me Wen. :) Thank you for the supportive words and congrats! :)
Date: 4/16/2023 1:11:00 PM
Pure whimsy - well done for your win, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/16/2023 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Julia. I appreciate this placement and your contests. :)
Date: 4/11/2023 10:23:00 PM
Ahh the day a song came to have its say., Hey.' Did it build slowly.? To a crescendo Though, did you get 'shell-shock?' Do you Even know.? Also did this visitor leave an Address.? I am thinking she soumds like A source..Should that be sauce.? Herrrm Never mind..' For a song; or songs of course.' P P D is going to come, next year this month If ? I we all get going some.! B t w I plead Rhyme control (I was casting no aspersions) on You..As you did quite a good show.' Linda-Alice, and good on ya.!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/12/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thank you for the fun poem Joe. No aspersion on my version? Better snide than suicide, eh? ;) LOL Yes, PPD will come again next year - wistful to think it will come every month, or week, or day. Thanks for coming by my friend. :) Linda Alice
Date: 4/10/2023 5:02:00 AM
Sweet:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/10/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Jo. :)
Date: 4/9/2023 2:24:00 PM
Such a creative and fun write, Alice. Now we know!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/9/2023 5:02:00 PM
:)) Thanks Daniel!

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