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    *The Daughter
    by Carmen Gimenez Smith       Painting by Laura Vasquez

If vain thy earthly hopes did prove, thou canst not mourn their flight; Thy brightest hopes were fixed above. And they shall know no blight—Anne-Bronte Overjoyed An amiable native of a temperate valley Begins her journey with swollen belly. A maiden's pangs of passion, flames afire. Prometheus’ torch burning bright, forbidden desire. Her love child is born. Celestia hija nació ! Not fated forlorn. Stringy, wrinkly, and with ruby red skin With a giggle as precious as can be, and an unrestrained ear to ear grin. A gem shining bright, Ruby the name was chosen. Her middle name Ann, tiny were her cheeks glowing rosen. Transcending space and time Ruby Ann's ambitions took flight. Intrinsically motivated—Thy brightest hopes were fixed above, and she shall not want for love nor ever know blight. A warmth rare, recherché as a searing scarlet stone. Inspirational speaker, a sonorous soprano’s tone Ravened tresses cascading down unruly. Copious tangled locks flow wild and curly. She perceives the wise in the callow and callow in the wise, with youths' oval ebony, and soulful eyes A warm and generous yet haunting sad smile, that will rid you of your hard heart’s denial. And with all beauty that spawns inside and out Proud to say that’s how I felt, and that out loud I shout! Transcending space and time, all have grown. Success arrived, sans a family joy of her own. Her uncertainty only grew as years trod by 'til new consciousness to explain why A weeping inner voice calls out the universe. Time wins unless the winds find the seeds to disperse. The pangs of a woman’s desire have begun, Riding on the lost carpet of a tune unsung And with a heart’s desire to bring the joy to a gem of her own, whether girl or a boy Now with hand holding hand, a bonding so sweet. He a tender heart she’d finally meet. An intimate kiss losing all inhibition. Besotted lovers in collaboration Serendipitous encounters and rendezvous, they submit to one another, and they go at it! A chance at love, an affection so deep Merriment relished together they’ll keep. Conception has blessed the two of them. Enfolding her, his family—his mother, a spiritual gem A spark of herself, a dusky jewel Inside her, my grit and timbre, a miracle renewal A cherished embryo in a daughter’s belly A destined native of a temperate valley Welcoming the birth, life they shall unfurl, Displayed is the validity of love—a baby girl, Her eyes are Neruda’s two dark pools at twilight* Gradual ebb of her father's darkness a birthright This sagacious native child of a temperate valley A native princess they called Zenzele

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Date: 7/30/2023 12:12:00 PM
WOW!!! A powerful write/story/picture. Have a great day/week.............
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/4/2023 9:33:00 PM
Belated thank you! Sweet Paula. :D
Date: 7/30/2023 5:00:00 AM
I will use this beautiful line, and build on it, give you credit for the quote dear poet. of course, Thanks for the inspiration
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/30/2023 1:24:00 PM
Of course, my dear! Love it! I just might post it in My quotes.
Date: 7/30/2023 4:58:00 AM
This is so amazing you kept me riveted from start to finish dear Anaya, my favorite line is "Time wins unless the winds find the seeds to disperse." how powerful is that !
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/30/2023 1:24:00 PM
A gentle way of telling of the biological clock that's ticking. I was hoping I did this some justice and am delighted you thought so, if this is what you got. LOL at times I don't even know what I'm saying. I am honored, Mystic Rose for your review. I enjoy your majestic poetry!
Date: 7/29/2023 7:05:00 AM
Anaya, I am so moved by the beauty and poetic execution of your story be it fiction, fable or history! So well crafted , it's a joy to read! Happy Saturday xxoo
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/29/2023 9:46:00 AM
Mike, I'm honored for you visit. It is a happy Saturday! Glad you enjoyed and am grateful for your review, it means so much. Xhugsx ~Anaya
Date: 7/27/2023 3:55:00 PM
You describe intimacy conception and birth so beautifully Anaya, and from baby to womanhood as a family grows with wonderful strong native women, just a delight to read. Your mention of the Fire god added to the wonderful imagery. A superb poem. A favorite with hope of a POTD. It should be. All the best SV
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/27/2023 8:37:00 PM
No mix up, plainly two generations of beautiful strong women. Your words are clear poetic, and utterly entrancing. You have a wonderful Talent.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/27/2023 5:38:00 PM
S.V. If you delighted in the poem, then I am pleased to share. Thank you, for the raving review! xhugs

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