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Outside Fun

Let's have some fun outside I'll plant some new flowers spruce up the tired summer beds so out I wandered into the garden Hunt high and low for my trowel can I heck find it, bet your ass no ok I will use a folk instead that is right close to hand Oh drats it's handle is cracked I can't use it like this so I search and finally find tape repaired I kneel down to work Only to find the soil far too hard so I fetch a spade from the shed backbreaking is the concrete ground I labour on thinking how nice it will be Taking a pause for a minute or two I suddenly realise that it's almost dark so much for not so well laid plans I have yet again squandered away the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/13/2013 5:52:00 AM
hi linda beautiful piece i enjoyed
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:33:00 AM
hi Liam ty dear Shadow x smile
Date: 9/11/2013 10:00:00 PM
Thank you Shadow, for the smile... Goodnight...Linda
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:32:00 AM
hi Linda good to be back been ill again +( ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/9/2013 12:25:00 PM
i like the whole mood of this, shadow----kinetic and delirious... i'm sure your garden is a bloom!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:34:00 AM
hi Nette my excellent gardener keeps it a picture lol a serene and beautiful haven. ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/8/2013 11:51:00 PM
i like this poem. good job
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:35:00 AM
Hi PJ sorry for slow response combination of illness and PC problems ty so much Shadow x smile

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