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8 by 5 Poetry Contest Joseph May We were on fire As flames grew higher Vowels in choir Two teens taking flight Where virgin wings sprite Upward to the moon Twinkle lil stars boon Fog on windows strewn Dad's car shifted gears In neutral she steers His Chevy's best years Lover's Lane at will Rocking the night's drill Backseat was the thrill Joyriding the night Under the moonlight N/A

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Date: 2/18/2025 5:18:00 PM
Think--of two teens making love in Dad's car (his Chevy's best years, the cars moving and shifting yet the cars in neutral and park). ... upward to the moon twinkle lil stars boon---who do you think are the lil stars?
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