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Benjamin Bartley mothers day poetry contest

Mothers Milk and Our Daily Bread

Our Daily Bread


Flour, yeast, and milk, a bit of butter too,
 and giving it some time to rise,
 into a loaf, it grew..

From this mass of sticky flour 
will come warm, pillow soft bread. 
My body continues its weary work,
 as thoughts float through my head. 

Looking out my window, 
I see the vast and clear blue skies, 
my heart fills up with longing…
like dough, perhaps I'll rise. 

My arms will grow soft feathers, 
my bones all hollow out…
giving me just what I'll need
 to fly and float about. 

Freedom from the daily drudge, 
from burdens and all my cares…
I'll flap my newly made wings
 and fly away from there. 

Out of this very window,
 into bright skies I see…
over the distant mountain tops
 to unknown mountain peaks.

Perhaps a place where I could find 
A peaceful people who…
give higher value to a woman's mind, 
and all that women do. 

We sisters of the uterus
                                     We captives of the Moon
We who bleed to create life
                                      Soldiers in stiletto shoes…

...carry more than our fair share 
of heavy burdens and the blame…
 our bodies are seductive 
and so, seem steeped in shame. 

These anchors bound to my arms
  These binding ties, severed,
when bone turns to hollow straw
 and skin sprouts supple feathers...

...then I'll rise like this yeasty dough 
and bake in the oven of the sun. 
 I hear the ding of alarm bells ring
                                      telling me my bread is done.

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Date: 4/23/2025 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on placing 2nd.....wonderfully woven womb words
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/23/2025 1:12:00 PM
Thank you! Xo
Date: 4/22/2025 4:42:00 PM
OMG. Congratulations again for being in the top 3 of my 3 contests I have sponsored thus far. CONGRATULATIONS #2 of the MOTHER'S DAY CONTEST!!! What a surprise to find out this was written by you, but I guess not really. This was an amazing poem, and I teetered between yours and the winner for hours until I made my final decision. As always, Thanks for Sharing!!!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/22/2025 5:37:00 PM
Thank you soooo very much! It is such an honor to place! I really liked this poem when I wrote it and was sad it didn't get much attention... I'm so proud it found it's niche with your contest! Appreciate all your hard work and the encouragement you've given me! Xoxo
Date: 5/11/2024 3:04:00 PM
Your poem is a delightful blend of sensory imagery and profound metaphor. Through the simple act of baking bread, the poet explores themes of longing, freedom, and the resilience of the human spirit. The vivid descriptions evoke a sense of warmth and comfort, while the underlying message of empowerment and self-discovery resonates deeply. The imagery of rising dough and soaring with newfound wings paints a vivid picture of liberation from societal constraints and the pursuit of a more authentic existence. Truly inspiring and thought-provoking!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/11/2024 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much... I'm proud I was able to relay all of that with words. So powerful, words. I appreciate yours! Xo
Date: 5/11/2024 12:47:00 PM
A number of awesome lines here: sisters of the uterus, soldiers in stilettos, etal. No shame over a woman's figure. I've seen many beautiful and awesome natural wonders, but for me nothing compares in beauteous splendor to a woman, God's ultimate creation, imho
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/11/2024 6:43:00 PM
Oh thank you Tom! I'm so proud of myself I'm about to bust! :) women should not feel shame over their bodies but I'm afraid it's still past and parcel with society and a lot of religions. But I agree with you, God created and called us good! No negative opinions needed! Thanks again for always taking time to read and comment. Xoxo
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