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Ordinary Poem

Picking up the trash I brush past you. You say "mind the ice." Underneath the concern---humor, a mental picture of my comic duck-walk. Half way to the garage I hear your voice again, as if your throat were joined to my belly. You sing to yourself as you fix a meal, I feel your salty gravity as a carnelian dipped in my blood. I carry you back to the kitchen still singing in my breast. At the sink, you wash and kiss my cold fingers as sotto voce, you reprise a song from ‘Frozen,’ while stirring hash in a skillet.

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Date: 11/2/2019 7:17:00 PM
You brought the relationship to life in your most interesting way. Thanks for your visit Eric.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/2/2019 7:31:00 PM
Thank you Richard the nice comment, and you are very welcome.
Date: 11/2/2019 12:37:00 PM
Dear Eric, not everyday will be like today, neither a poem like this. Thanks.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/2/2019 2:44:00 PM
Hi Tamanna, that's very kind of you to say so. Obliged!

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