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"Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it."~ Rumi Dear Diary, I’m a hopeless romantic, a sentimental sonnet scribbled from the silent heartstrings of a mysterious muse. Forgive me for another redundant prose; Cupid too despised my last love-sick letter enveloped in lavender lipstick, written with lethargic i n k.. Although I’m still an unheard verse, a poetic paradox etched across thin lines of mauve lunar lace, drifting amongst metered clichés flagged as an unrhymed riddle, rafting along rippling regrets, woven with orchid oxymorons. But it all started with a blank canvas when the cruel fangs of monsoon monsters drenched paper roses within, leaving a forlorn field of black thorns and blood-stained thistles. I remember musky taste of vanilla rain while I unfurled my fragile fingers, caressing cold dandelion clouds~ questioning the moon in melancholic tunes. What is truth but a faceless tarp? Is life but a breathing lie for sapphire stars sleeping amidst the rising sun? Are we mere dreamers living a myth scripted as fantasies untold? It is through confusion that we find constellations of clarity~ to rise above shackling gravity, this opalescent orb is oblivious to the magic flowing as madness, labelling poignant pigments in my palette, drawn from the tunnels of thin veins, as thick-skinned sagas of a succubus floating across Lilith’s lethal lake of rustic reflections. Maybe we are mere poets weaving hope amidst meaningless scribes, veiling our vision from seeing beyond scribbles soaring along hazy horizons. Yet, I tremble at tulip thoughts of dahlia doodles, for your ivory garden is my weakness and strength, pulling violin vines of my ebony soul to orchestrate an opera that serenades sunflower symphonies composed to cleanse foggy mists, blindfolding icy sighs within fiery emerald eyes. If this were to be my final rune purging upon pages hanging like silver lanterns in your ceramic cerulean, remember me, the mistress of bleeding ballads, healing from swollen syllables of fading sunsets. Sincerely, a lost weaver of lyrical woes…

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Date: 3/7/2024 6:24:00 PM
IE, I often think of stages of life that we experience in a fog. Hopefully, clarity establishes in time. Poems often seem to develop in the same way. I'm not thinking that I am going to be remembered for much beyond the next generation if at all. If your emotions and words are really spectacular, they may live on. I hope that can happen for you. You have a remarkable talent and the fact that it touches us here is fantastic in and of itself.
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Date: 2/27/2024 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write starting with Dear Diary then ending with Sincerely, a lost weaver of lyrical woes… Love It... Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 2/27/2024 2:57:00 AM
Hearty congratulations on your top placement for a wonderful write with vivid imagery and flowing rhythms.
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Date: 2/26/2024 3:46:00 PM
Lavender lipstick and vanilla rain, such unique images Empress Congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 2/26/2024 12:08:00 PM
I love how your poem unfolds as a narrative diary, where your bare your soul with an honesty that resonates deeply. The opening lines set the tone for a confession of the heart, as you identify yourself as a hopeless romantic, a seeker of beauty amidst the tumultuous landscape of human experience .. Your poem speaks to the universal longing for connection, understanding, and redemption. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:16:00 AM
Powerful diction- was a beautiful read <3
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Date: 2/25/2024 8:03:00 AM
Poem is a painting with colors and meanings swirling to create the search for oneself. I liked the lines "Cupid too despised my last love sick letter enveloped in lavender lipstick, written with lethargic ink". A pleasant verse indeed.
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/25/2024 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear hilda im always grateful for your kind support
Date: 2/25/2024 7:15:00 AM
Oh, wondrous creation, Dearest Ink, brimming with dazzling alliterations. Does life exist as a deceitful facade for slumbering celestial bodies under the awakening sun? Are we mere dreamers, dwelling in a narrative of mythical proportions, veiled as untold fantasies? deriving solace from the eloquent arrangement of diminishing twilight. Your poetic musings transport the reader on a profound odyssey of love's pursuit, adorned with resplendent portrayals. A FAVE
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Date: 2/25/2024 8:33:00 AM
Dear dr sotto thank you so very much for your fave and also for your kind and thoughtful feedback im always grateful
Date: 2/25/2024 6:08:00 AM
Your poetic thoughts take the reader on a meaningful exploration of romantic journey, in splendid descriptions of love's quest:- --Is life but a breathing lie for sapphire stars sleeping amidst the rising sun? Are we mere dreamers living a myth scripted as fantasies untold?----If this were to be my final rune, remember me, the mistress of bleeding ballads, healing from swollen syllables of fading sunsets--- Your muse is on fire, my friend. A FAVE!
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/25/2024 8:33:00 AM
that means alot coming from a talented poet like you vijay thank you so very much truly
Date: 2/25/2024 3:17:00 AM
"what is truth but a faceless tarp"...Ink, that line stopped me in my tracks to reflect....a hard truth amid such beauty
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/25/2024 8:35:00 AM
Wow that means alot coming from you dear john . Grateful for your support always
Date: 2/25/2024 1:48:00 AM
Dearest Ink - I just love this - and I will tell you why: it has all of your usual colourful words but it has something more, a thing that I love about poetry. It is a slight departure for you, but a really positive direction in my humble view - these words have trajectory, a story arc and a wonderfully personally crafted one too. I quite adore it and that is why it will be favourited. Thank you for doing such a great job on this and making it extra special!! Sxx
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/25/2024 8:44:00 AM
Ah i believe you, its because i tried writing without thinking , just a bleed out, so maybe its easier to comprehend for some, it means alot really your fave and also your sincere feedback, iv never read george macdonald but now i will read some online if i can find some. Thank you so very much again for your kind visit
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Date: 2/25/2024 1:51:00 AM
You also nod to one of my favourite books by George MacDonald :)
Date: 2/24/2024 11:56:00 PM
Mmm .. look at all these amazing allegations!!! sentimental sonnet scribbled from the silent .. mysterious muse.. Cupid too despised my last love-sick letter enveloped in lavender lipstick,. Damn papi.. poetic paradox etched across thin lines of mauve lunar lace, floating across Lilith’s lethal lake of rustic reflections.. veiling our vision from seeing beyond scribbles soaring along hazy horizons.. I always love the dreamy element you bring to ur pieces. healing from swollen syllables of fading sunsets.. u know how to make us drift effortlessly
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/25/2024 8:44:00 AM
Ah papi u rawk
Date: 2/24/2024 11:54:00 PM
This is one of your best poem… love it
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/25/2024 12:06:00 AM
Lol really??? Thats news dahlin thank you so much

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