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Open Your Eyes

Open your eyes and you will see The beauty that surrounds us Listen with your ears and here The sounds that calm us In a world that seems so cruel, dark and full of all our fears All we really need is a new course to steer So many people with all their problems hanging on a hook There's still light, peace and joy if we only knew where to look Why can't we raise our weary heads Let it all go and become who we're meant to be instead Stop hiding away from things you doubt No more excuses, no more hanging about Open your mind and you'll be free This world can be a better place, you will see A place that's not so dark and cruel A place where light, love and peace surround us all Date: 1999

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Date: 12/2/2021 8:10:00 AM
Hello Stephen This is a beautiful poem that reminds one on the beauty of life. I will open my eyes, indeed. Regards Mpho.
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Stephen Mayne
Date: 12/2/2021 3:21:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/29/2021 11:39:00 PM
Poet Stephen Meyne has thrown new light on opened eyes. I like his idea, really.
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Stephen Mayne
Date: 11/30/2021 5:59:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/29/2021 9:24:00 PM
Stephen, this is a wonderful poem I hope to see you compose more with this sensitive tone. Very positive! Carol Louise
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Stephen Mayne
Date: 11/30/2021 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 11/29/2021 11:45:00 AM
Hello Stephen Mayne, I like this poem you created . It will be my fav. So nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/30/2021 6:20:00 AM
Hello Stephen Mayne, I enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Stephen Mayne
Date: 11/30/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thank you, glad you like it. : )
Date: 7/7/2019 7:28:00 AM
I like this contemplative piece.
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Date: 4/7/2018 3:46:00 AM
Lovely x
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Stephen Mayne
Date: 4/7/2018 4:20:00 AM
Thank you.

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