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His eyes held the opaque aura of vagrancy immune to the generosity of strangers offer him dubious fulfillment, reflect a scene without ever seeing it his eyelids a blinking metronome counting coup on times tenacity. This blindness, this long sullied sight, devoid of compassion, empathy tarnished in the blackened light of day denying what once was seen as beauty shuttered visions shadow dancing world gray forms in silhouette half life. ©11/22/2019 opaque poetry Contest

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Date: 11/23/2019 6:23:00 PM
G'day John … I picture the bloke as someone who has given up on humanity and prefers to be left alone - thank you John - Lindsay
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John Lawless
Date: 11/24/2019 7:43:00 AM
...or has humanity given up on him???...Thanks for stopping by Lindsay, always nice to hear from you
Date: 11/23/2019 9:14:00 AM
Well done John. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest. Happy Thanksgiving
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John Lawless
Date: 11/25/2019 7:55:00 AM
thanks Greg, these contest themes set the muse loose
Date: 11/23/2019 6:09:00 AM
a poem that highlights loneliness and sadness... nice entry for the contest..
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John Lawless
Date: 11/24/2019 7:42:00 AM
The eyes are the windows of the soul-less. Or just glazed over by the Black Friday frenzy

Book: Shattered Sighs