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I really miss my grandma. 

I would've liked. Something. Something like a hug goodbye. I would've really loved a sign, a whisper, a warning light to tell me you’d be gone soon. But now, I'm left with sorrow. Tears. Despair. All I can do is blame myself, even when I know, it’s not my fault. I would've liked, something, something like one more hug.

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Date: 10/12/2024 12:10:00 PM
Regrets are common when it comes to angst relationships or when someone dies unexpectedly. Your poem aptly illustrates this
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/12/2024 12:15:00 PM
I just tried to put into few words how I've been feeling lately about this. I tried my really best to explain it.

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