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On the Skids

On the skids with no brakes, thankfully, a memory; that began with falling, falling over and over again, with bruises that healed; such is childhood. I tried to attack the slippery slope, challenged by youtube videos that I could wisely imbibe; teenager at heart was I… to fall flat, flatter than a pancake. As this was a few years back, still a Big-Mac Grandmother; a smucker-grape hugger. Bigger than life; life was bigger than me. Who was I to inspire? I lit my bum on fire. Who am I to think that each one was like the other? Those grand-girls flew past me, in blurs. The youngest boy, now ten, screamed until I relinquished, took off those skates then circled the rink as I chased him down. His elder brother, held on for dear life, just wouldn’t let go of the skate mate; but I am old, or so I am told. I grew up when no helmet was required, where seat belts were optional; free to choose, “I will survive.” So, do I think today’s kids are wimps? I’ve joined the ranks of wimpiness; it is the key to living longer. By the way, the kid won’t climb a tree. He sees each and every bug. Were they there when I was young?

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Date: 2/14/2025 11:37:00 AM
Hey Kim, I have also had my spills as my son was growing up and one or two have left their mark but I'm sure I won't be doing any skidding with my grandaughter, she's only two now, grandma must do her stunts more carefully now! Enjoyed your poem my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:49:00 PM
Even when we are careful those rugrats pull us into some situations…lol! Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs and HVD!
Date: 2/12/2025 3:44:00 PM
Such raw memory, even the sweet ones - so beautifully written, reaches to my center <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 2/12/2025 8:10:00 AM
Hi Kim, how things have changed since my childhood, your poem sums it up perfectly. xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:50:00 PM
For sure! Thank you, John!
Date: 2/12/2025 7:43:00 AM
Oh those grandparent memories! So sadly sweet. Love the last stanza. Great stuff, Kim, as usual. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2025 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Marinus!
Date: 2/12/2025 5:45:00 AM
- I wouldn't dare try it today, Kim ... maybe 30 years ago :))) - I loved climbing trees as a child ... - I also grew up without a helmet and seatbelt - Take it easy grandma :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2025 7:13:00 AM
I will! Now I have problems with my leg. If I can walk, I am good.

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