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I am positively negative that's why friends and family get a charge out of me, except on rainy days when I'm negatively negative that's called vitamin D deficiency induced gloomy-ness. How I long for the sun and the flowers; where is the fun when the rain showers its gloom on the bowers?

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Date: 6/21/2024 3:03:00 PM
Very clever and pokes at fun- loved it
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Date: 6/20/2024 4:29:00 PM
I know this feeling. By end of November, I'm totally affected by S.A.D. thanks for the vitamin D tip.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 6/20/2024 7:32:00 PM
I can always tell when I am experiencing a rainy day versus a sunny day, and I live in the Pacific Northwest so, lots of rainy days. A few years ago some doctors tried to say SAD wasn’t a real thing. Sure Doc, if you say so.

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