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In that we are all a vassal to age no sceptre or mitre can set us free, and no fealty can old time assuage or rail against its synchronicity. For ever decreasing circles besot the cognisance of what and who we are, yet I am not fogged to what time begot but wise to your end and your exemplar - of all our earthly labours and pleasure, and all that was ventured and lost or won for insofar love is the true measure I shall be its keeper when you are gone. Alas, no mortal thing this world outlast yet still the risen sun your shadow cast. Written: November 2010

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Date: 6/5/2024 4:07:00 PM
"Two men look through prison bars, one saw mud, the other, stars". ~~~ I see your stars here and your mud elsewhere. Which vision do you think is more likely to fix the world?
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Date: 7/31/2022 6:45:00 AM
This is outstanding!
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