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Old Snow

old snow still lays white crusted in ice yet hollow treacherous stepping

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/1/2015 10:18:00 AM
Janet, I live in Texas, but this is what I make out of old snow. I don't trust it.. :) Love this..Linda
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Janet Boebert
Date: 2/3/2015 7:03:00 PM
Don't!
Date: 1/30/2015 3:07:00 PM
What appears solid in life is many times empty tombs . . . another great haiku, on to the next one! 7
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Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:00:00 PM
Empty tombs - great image. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.

Book: Shattered Sighs