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Of Promises

She slips away having turned cold No reason, it’s just her nature Her first night will always linger Tickertape dreams always endure The heat of romance quelled her cold Torched by the warmth of her beauty Surrounded by youth’s couture We stood between a past and future Promises, fragile champagne bubbles Bursting from a lost hearts longing ‘Neath fireworks of passions lie Succumb to faded street light paths Thus, do we dream upon waking Of promises slowly grown cold

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Date: 2/4/2025 9:42:00 PM
Many can relate to your Sonnet John your last sentence asking the question really emphasized your message. Thanks for sharing John...
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Date: 1/25/2025 12:39:00 PM
beautifully written, john!
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