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Of Lisa

Of Lisa My mind it melded perfectly, a half hour difference birthday see, our eyes did lock intensively, my soul within me shook. And shuddered is it thee? My soul-mate of the book? and I was swimming hooked, entranced each word partook, as it was spoken, we? Lost in the depths of she, two souls the lovers look, lost in her eyes was me, do soul-mates swim till hooked? Or wait for eternity, check-mated history? Chook, does the wood-axe wait for thee:} Don Johnson

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Date: 11/29/2015 10:50:00 PM
I don't know if this is a real girl or just a book. Cuz I get caught up in books myself or a poem if it's open. Anyways I like your story :)
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Don Johnson
Date: 11/29/2015 11:21:00 PM
real story babe...outcome , perhaps?
Date: 11/27/2015 1:52:00 PM
Pen-sitivity at its best here Don..'
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Date: 11/27/2015 7:24:00 PM
a real situation ...still not sure of the outcome:}
Date: 11/24/2015 1:09:00 PM
- This is one of your pearls, Don - A really wonderful write - Hope all is well with you - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2015 11:38:00 AM
wow! What a beautiful and excellent write, i love how you conveyed it. brilliant one...............A.M
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:40:00 AM
I like this, Don! I like the fishing analogy and my favorite line "check-mated history". Great write! Love, Kim
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