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Obama

It's not just cuz he's black, That I got his back. He just wants to be free, Just like you and me. I'll count on him through and through I expect all of you to too. I hope all of you, yes and yo momma, To respect Barack Obama. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you Mr.President

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 4/22/2009 5:18:00 PM

Good job Savannah and thanks for the comment. Like your use of ryhme.

Chris Yarnell

Date: 4/14/2009 11:51:00 AM

very good ............................OBAMA RULEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/20/2009 12:15:00 AM

My thanks are also extended along with your poem. I respect our President regardless of color. I think the message you convey is nicely penned. Great job and I left you some soup mail...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2009 4:31:00 PM

Savannah, a fitting tribute to a president with great potential! It's wonderful to have a wise and thoughtful leader for our country again, isn't it? I certainly share the sentiments you expressed, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/19/2009 4:04:00 PM

some people seem a little less oppinionated. but i wont be cuz i got yo back. not just because of black, i want to be free just as free as free is suppose to be. because that is what America is; a blood stained country that is free. John H Loving III