Not Circadian

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Maureen McGreavy's 'Ice Saccades' the inspiration for this senryu

Doctor, my 'Saccadian rhythms' Eyes, not ears...

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/29/2019 6:37:00 AM

Cute! Delighted to inspire! Vestibular-from Latin vestibule, ears and eyes the entrance to the brain; apparently, correcting Saccades will affect correction of balance issues in the ears too, and vice versa, all connected. Isn't everything? ;) xomo <3

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/29/2019 9:13:00 AM

Yes! Everything is connected; everything comes full circle... And thank you for the 'edumucation!' ~ Grinning in Chicago

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/28/2019 4:10:00 PM

My circadian rhythms are much more concerning to my doctor, yet, they bother me not a whit.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/28/2019 8:03:00 PM

Love your comment. Hilarious! I can just picture the befuddlement overspreading your doctor's face as you tell him how you feel (about your circadian rhythms). ~ gw