Get Your Premium Membership

Not Anymore

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Darren White.


Without poetry, life would be unbearable; without roots, it often is. But poetry makes everything sunny and better, same goes for friends!!!

The meme is made by my dear friend Mel.

Sitting on this bed, is large enough Me to him, hands frantically talking On paper, he replies: “It’s rough, I won’t deny. One day you’re walking”. Angry shrug, hah! Heard it all before. Those friendly words won’t last: “Don’t judge yourself by your past You don’t live there anymore” This rock, it’s cold, if creeps up spines It refuses comfort, it’s unforgiving Writing goodbye in a hundred lines Past is why future is not worth living Scared, cold, and lonely to the core Incomprehensible words, a shadow cast: “Don’t judge yourself by your past You don’t live there anymore” Wind blows my written words away Language shattered in the wind In the distance glows the day In a myriad sparkles and I find It hard to say: “I want no more” So I turn around and go back fast “Don’t judge yourself by your past You don’t live there anymore” It came so close, I was so near, The wheels are squeaking madness Not wanting death, but living fear Anger, resentment, sadness. But in my head the real words tore And understanding there, at last: I am done judging by my past I don’t live there anymore!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/1/2016 10:32:00 AM
I love this poem...but in my mind the real words tore...that is a killer of a line
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 12/1/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thank you. It was and sometimes still is a hard reality.... As far as I am concerned it's one of the best poems I've ever written, it's funny how sometimes people ADORE poems you don't think are that special, and are not commenting on poems you think are your best :)
Date: 11/18/2016 9:48:00 AM
Wow!! Darren you're truly gifted. This is such an important write and message. Moving forward as difficult as it can be is the only option we have and we must embrace our lives. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.:) A definite fav! I will read this poem often!
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 11/18/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thank you! I am happy you understood it! And yes, you are right :)
Date: 9/3/2016 6:51:00 PM
Very powerful write! Excellent !
Login to Reply
White Avatar
Darren White
Date: 9/3/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thank you so much :)

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry