Home » Poems » Sabrina Robillard » Noisy Clock

Noisy Clock

My clock is ticking on the wall Keeping me awake It seems it doesn't care at all That it's getting rather late Tick Tock! Tick Tock! Coming from the clock I may just have to take my clock And throw it off the dock!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 12:14:00 PM

Wonderful reading your excellent poetry today Sabrina. Love, Carol

Susan Burd

Date: 10/23/2012 7:17:00 AM

Yes, that sure is one way to watch time fly! Good one!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 10/22/2012 11:35:00 PM

Lol, yes, throw it away. Who needs it? Love ya, Toquyen

Ayesha Karim

Date: 10/22/2012 10:23:00 PM

This is such a fun good humorous poem. I imagine a grandfather clock or a loud noisy wall clock that ticks every second on the minute and the speaker of the poem getting so irrate and irritated he explodes with rage grabbing the clock and throwing it off the dock! I could see most of these things happening for real reading the poem made mental pictures in my head.