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'Neath Dark Waters

placid… the surface … not one ripple seen… though ‘neath dark waters ~ sharks preen

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Date: 3/25/2024 11:33:00 AM
Many don’t want to see how murky the dark waters.
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Date: 3/24/2024 9:43:00 PM
Sharks are the reason I don't desire ocean swimming. This is a good poem. It may save a life.
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Date: 3/24/2024 9:24:00 PM
Not everything seems like it is. Love your theme Gershon and the dichotomy at the end. A favorite...
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