Natural Commandments

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captiatism is very divisive...competition so all prevailing that culture is dog eat dog

take care of your own... love your family and friends... give others respect... seek to help your group... taking care of the workers... takes care of country... return any favors... brotherhood always returns... reaping of rewards... confront challenges... change needs unbending resolve... or benefits will lack... heed authority... there are elders and the skilled... liberty and laws... be unprejudiced... there's respect honor and trust... evenhandedness... value others things... family property goods... nothing is worthless... stan sand

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Sherry Asbury

Date: 12/2/2018 10:09:00 AM

LOVE this - it is the way we should live. A lo of wisdom here - wisdom for the here and now!

Sand Blown
Date: 12/2/2018 9:02:00 PM

thank you sherry...reading philosophy has long been a habit : )

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/29/2018 8:22:00 AM

Nice combinations of Haiku's in sequence...Great message too...All the best Sand

Sand Blown
Date: 11/29/2018 10:15:00 AM

thanks michael...'sometimes...late at night...things go... right'

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/29/2018 2:04:00 AM

Lovely hakiu Sand. We should all abide by them. Tom.

Sand Blown
Date: 11/29/2018 6:00:00 AM

thanks tom...if the banks and 1%'ers stayed away from all the gravy the world's population could get along without 'possession' feigning as the new world order of the struggling new 'imperials'