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Excitement overflowed in their loving abode. Their hearts were in a whirl. The results showed it’s a girl. With still months to wait All they did was anticipate The coming blessed event. His wife with her Russian accent Sang joyously all day long. Such happiness in each song. All was in readiness for the baby Except to pick a name maybe. His wife had ideas of a sweet name. They just couldn’t agree on one and the same. He wanted her named after his mother Mary Jane Smith, He didn’t pick another. Svetlana Tatiana Galina Smith his wife chose. Now this became a great problem that arose. Finally the day of their daughter’s birth. More precious than gold the baby was worth. To all visitors their beautiful daughter was shown. To the nurses Baby Smith she was known. The form they were given for the birth registry. Would they name her Svetlana or would she be Mary? I will keep you guessing for a little longer. Whose decision was to be the very much stronger? Years passed her nick name became Sweet Pea. A loving family, no happier could they be. Soon it was time for their beautiful girl to go to school. Her Birth Certificate had to be produced, it was the rule. The certificate was handed to the school forthwith Showing the child’s name being Nameless Smith.

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Date: 11/26/2023 9:46:00 PM
"Showing the child’s name being Nameless Smith" - A great story beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/27/2023 1:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much, I am pleased that you liked it.
Date: 11/26/2023 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place - I'm just practicing all the nice ways that could be pronounced and sound pretty!
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Date: 11/27/2023 1:57:00 AM
Try Sweet Pea ! Thanks for the lovely Congrats.
Date: 11/16/2023 4:37:00 PM
The agony, teachers cannot pronounce a name and take it into their own hands. Such is life. I would hide my face red with blush when they pronounced it wrong. Well written and rhymed SV, beautiful child image.
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Date: 11/16/2023 6:44:00 PM
Their kindy teacher had it so hard pronouncing their names she just always called my boys "the twinnies" They hated it. Their names ? Marc & Jon ! Thanks for your comment Ana...ya (sorry couldn't resist) ! She is a beautiful child isn't she? Takes attention off my poor poem lol. Cheers.. Wen
Date: 11/16/2023 2:45:00 PM
Whatever her name, what a beautiful child. I've always liked the name Mary, or Marianne
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