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Mythical Lyre

in meadows more verdant than evergreen there is but an Orphic lyre that tingles in dream’s delight, haunting, husking, heaving the songs my soul cannot reach except in interludes of moonlight’s chant, as the nearness of grasses twirl my hair dancing with inner wolves in velvet chorus...not of moaning trespasses but for now, if only for now, on the stage of star-glow blushing my face I am relieved from the rasp of past’s tatters... this same plucking of lyre fiddles higher higher while the movement of its rhapsody dangles like a mythical lore on duskfall's arms cleansing me from a silent scream so punishing. Paint Me A Picture 4 for Silent One's Contest 10/11/2017

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Date: 10/16/2017 1:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette.
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Date: 10/14/2017 1:13:00 AM
Nette, excellent write congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 10/13/2017 10:33:00 PM
Nette - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:42:00 AM
Congrats Nette :)
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:31:00 AM
You have written a wonderful poem Nette, some great lines in this.. Your poetic vocabulary is amazing.. The beginning of the second stanza is brilliant.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:46:00 PM
You have painted a picture indeed! oh and that last line amazing Nette!
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Date: 10/11/2017 11:27:00 PM
Have you ever thought of getting your brilliant poems published? You should you know, you are one seriously good poet. This is a winner in my eyes already Nette, but good luck anyway...Maria xx
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:22:00 PM
Lush and beautiful imagery in your fantastic write Nette. Each line as lovely as the line before and as beautiful as the line after... Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/11/2017 4:20:00 PM
Gosh, tantalizing poetry-tunes from your fluid pen; music cleanses the soul.
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Date: 10/11/2017 12:33:00 PM
This reads well nette--words chosen carefully to echo the lyre and the mythical tale--best for a win!
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Date: 10/11/2017 12:33:00 PM
This reads well nette--words chosen carefully to echo the lyre and the mythical tale--best for a win!
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Date: 10/11/2017 12:21:00 PM
This mystical poem is full of haunting imagery, a beautiful musicality and a sibtle power that carries the reader along with it. "Orphic" stands out ; you are a metaphor queen!
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Date: 10/11/2017 11:35:00 AM
wow, this is beautiful. Good luck in the contest - this one reads like a winner
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Date: 10/11/2017 10:56:00 AM
Woman, undeniably a rich spin of an ORPHIC melody you have created in a lyrical, fashion, " dancing with inner wolves" and cleansing a troubled mind. I am slain by this outstanding poem!
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