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My Very First Kiss

When I got my very first kiss my heart was pounding in my chest; as feelings go, it was the best. My life was filled with instant bliss; I felt I was floating on air, without any worries or care. I never knew I'd feel like this it's well beyond my wildest dream; and feels so good, I want to scream. Nothing in my world is amiss; having passed my initial fright everything suddenly feels right. My first kiss is hard to dismiss; I'm wearing a permanent smile, and strutting with pizzazz and style. When I got my very first kiss my life was filled with instant bliss; I never knew I'd feel like this. Nothing in my world is amiss; my first kiss is hard to dismiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/12/2018 12:07:00 AM
Great writing, !!!! really moved me !! all I got was a feeling that I did it wrong !!
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Date: 7/12/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Graham, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:42:00 AM
Nice example composing a sweet romantic poem. I appreciate.
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Date: 7/6/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2018 12:04:00 AM
Yep, forgot to mention it first time around, a great example Emile. Mick
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Mick, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/13/2018 10:29:00 AM
Emile, a sweet poem and a great example for your contest...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/13/2018 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/31/2018 1:21:00 PM
Sweet, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/13/2018 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/2/2017 8:24:00 AM
A sweet poem Emile . Good luck in the contest :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/2/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/1/2017 9:38:00 PM
A first kiss is forever a treasure memory. A sweet memory to reminisce on, Emile. I'm glad to read yours again, been a while :) hugs and smiles :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/2/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Akkina, I welcome your comments and support my friend, Emile.

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