My Only Dream

My only dream

~ I took this dream that I found at the border Painted it black, much more easy to hide Went to a shadow, just sitting there waiting Wished it farewell and then slipped it inside Went on my way knowing something was missing Looked for a song that would tend to my heart Whistled along, out of tune with my feelings Hoping I'd see a new place I could start It didn't work it was all I was thinking Turned back around slowly headed for home Took the spare key that you sent in a letter Opened the lock, there was nowhere to roam Turned on a light found the shadow was missing Tried not to look or at least it might seem There on the floor it was patiently waiting I know you will always be my only dream ~
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Date: 3/19/2020 2:38:00 PM
A tinge of sadness ending with the beauty of She in your dream.So beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/19/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so very much Charmaine
Date: 3/2/2020 7:29:00 AM
To have a beautiful dream locked in your heart...even in the shadows, still shows a heart of love! Blessings, my most romantic friend!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 9:26:00 AM
Thank you again Kim. :)
Date: 2/29/2020 4:59:00 PM
Hey Chris I really enjoyed this. Enthralling!! A Fave. Best wishes. Ron :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 2/28/2020 6:29:00 PM
you have a way of conveying your emotions wonderfully through your words... such a yearning is felt in this poignant write... have a great weekend Chris... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Sandy for always being so kind to me.
Date: 2/28/2020 6:24:00 PM
Saturated in sadness. We long for that key to open happiness. Please read my new sonnet. Blessings, my friend!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim.
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