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My One Wish For Santa

Dearest Santa, my one wish may seem strange but please do not interpret me as snide. I wish this kindness so please do arrange my Christmas gift of a mail order bride. Surely she would lighten my hard work load, help with the children and spousal demands. She can be pretty or favor a toad as long as it’s English she understands. I fail domestic perfection with house, Mom affection with little ones each day and attending His Lordship, my own spouse, because my to-do list stays in the way. Again, this may seem most unorthodox but this is me thinking outside the box. I know that you must judge, weigh and ponder if I was a well-behaved girl this year: I tried leaving home for the far yonder - my car died before even driveway clear; I lace my morning coffee with brandy; hide my husband’s tickets to pro baseball; stuff chips under chairs when comes Priest Andy; I oft ignore my children when they call; sometimes I name dust bunnies on our floor; sarcasm is my first go to coping tool; I cheat at cards when adding up my score; and June just past, I peed in a pal's pool. I work hard without reward all day long, so sometimes, yeah, I get this life all wrong. I wish to remember why I am here; recall romantic love that started all. I could succeed if I had a wife-peer helping with spousal gall and toddler brawls. I want more than bathtubs layered with dirt and stinking trash bordering on a spill. Let someone else produce an ironed shirt and seek deep sleep as an ambitious thrill. I want memories of kids where I smile and husband conversations standing still. I seek family love to feel worthwhile lest I seek happy docs with happy pills. One or both of us can wed my wished bride, just, please, Santa, in my favor decide.
... CayCay Written: December 28, 2017 Contest - I Want Christmas Poems

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Date: 12/6/2021 5:02:00 AM
This is really out of the box thinking, CayCay:) I see it has won, as it should have, my congratulations:) hope you and yours are doing well this Christmas season:)
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Date: 12/15/2019 8:16:00 AM
CayCay congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/14/2019 12:18:00 AM
This clever entry was so much fun to read CayCay. You did a splendid job and I could tell you put some thought and time into it. Congratulations on your win! xxoo Mele Kalikimaka! : )
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Date: 7/4/2018 8:46:00 AM
Oh I understand this one well. Congratulations on your win! Well written. I like this style too. Funny. :)
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Date: 7/3/2018 7:24:00 AM
LOL I sure hope you got your wish, CayCay. Sounds perfectly logical to me.
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:48:00 PM
Hello CayCwoay, oh..wow! This is a different type of poem. I am impressed! Have a nice day my friend.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/1/2018 2:13:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene, I keep hoping the contest sponsor will show results sometime soon. I enjoyed writing this one and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 12/29/2017 7:58:00 AM
Lol! Love it!
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Date: 12/28/2017 8:20:00 PM
Caycay you did AMAZING with your sonnets. Wow, very impressive. You followed his instructions so well: presenting the wish, telling why you were naughty and then the follow up! BEST one I have seen in this contest! And a FAVE. AS for Crown of sonnets. It means you start the first line of each new sonnet with the ending line of the one that came before. Go see mine again and you should understand. But a REAL crown sonnet does this like 7 or 10 times! So the judge took that rule off the table!
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Date: 12/28/2017 3:55:00 PM
A great idea for the contest.. i like the last sonnet the best... All three have good rhymes and flow...
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Date: 12/28/2017 2:29:00 PM
I think you need a priest more than Santa Cay Cay. Either that or a a hit man. Funny stuff, I’ll be back to congratulate you later...
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:26:00 AM
Love your well-thought-out Santa letter. There is humor and intentions. Not sure if Santa should give this dud what he’s wished for but perhaps a wife that will get him on track is what he needs.
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:12:00 AM
That is funny and well written, thanks for the chuckle. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:08:00 AM
CayCay, your muse is thinking outside the box on this one. I really got a good laugh this morning. Best of luck. John
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