My Life As Poetry

"My Life as Poetry"
When the Lotus Eaters at Loon Junction barked I ignored their confused chicanery closed the gates behind me I dropped one tear in your sedentary ocean it contained a lifetime the salt was wasted on your dead sea and I used it to flavour my life as poetry (LadyLabyrinth / 2021) gvlm klb, mlb (the others don't matter)
"When I Grow Up" / Fever Ray https://youtu.be/4F-CpE73o2M
"When I grow up I want to be a forester Run through the moss on high heels That's what I'll do Throwing out a boomerang Waiting for it to come back to me... I put my soul into what I do"
LYRICS - "When I Grow Up"/ Fever Ray https://genius.com/Fever-ray-when-i-grow-up-lyrics
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Date: 6/13/2021 3:04:00 PM
Lark Ascending.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/13/2021 3:05:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/lark_ascending_1349839
Date: 6/13/2021 9:14:00 AM
is not confusion the first step on the staircase leading to wisdom? yet many are afraid to take the next step, it is easier to walk away and comment on the darkness perceived with blind eyes...love of poetry is a shapeless formless ethereal realm where dreams haunt the wandering soul with eternal wishes that hold the shape of the heart it's contained in
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/13/2021 3:04:00 PM
...without dark, no light. But then you are older and a sage to read here in these esteemed pages of the consommé. The best Sonnet writer, I believe. I write what I know. Thank you for your comments Herr Parker, I soak them up like the sponge I am. What I squeeze out of it, could be enthralling, or not. I take the next step, every day and believe me there is no confusion in what I've written or experienced. x
Date: 6/12/2021 1:19:00 PM
I place it far above mine and do so quite sincerely. As your creativity is truly astounding. And the imagery and depths always tops... God bless...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/12/2021 5:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts. Collaboration between creative talent, such as poetry, can be harnessed in many ways, other than 'writing a poem together'. I have been writing since I was 9years old, so I understand where you are coming from below Robert. I have also spent a large portion of my career around writing, writers, journalists and my childhood was surrounded by books and writing - throw in the challenges and joy of life experience - the forest my stories come from is rich and fertile. There is more dark in my life, than Light, but funnily enough my family crest motto is Lux Vitae - so I strive for the Light. I am a writer, and I write well, I know this very well. I am left of centre. There is always room for improvement and I am constantly evolving as a writer. I challenge myself, to write different genres. I prefer dark over light. I was speaking with a friend the other day and mentioned, while I appreciate the classics - I am more intrigued by the abstract in life.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/12/2021 5:33:00 PM
I can see the beauty in a Rembrandt, but I prefer to study, read, and understand a Brett Whitely, a Marsden Hartley, or a Georgia O'Keeffe for eg. Like the art I admire and find intriguing, I prefer poets who are complex (not easy to read first hit, reeling you back to translate somehow again - nor am I magnetised by poetry full of romantic fluff) and usually my favourite poets, you can read many different ways, and walk away with something of you, you have found in their thoughts and experiences. One writer that comes to mind in the Soup, who writes very well like this is James Swartz, who hasn't posted in some time, which is a shame - but he is well worth the read, to understand where I am coming from with abstract metaphor.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/12/2021 4:44:00 PM
continued- as I started writing at age 14. And I have never quit writing for more than just a few weeks at a time, over these many decades. To me poetry is a blessing- and sometimes seems to be a curse. But a curse that I am not willing to give up.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/12/2021 4:37:00 PM
I strongly disagree and do so by the way of judging the very positive and inspiring effect your poetry has on me. Not just its creativity and beauty but its originality and depths that so oft send me into a state of awe. I would never, never, never call any of your writing substandard. As I see so very much in it. I hope that you do not think me insane but your poetry has inspired dozens of ideas for poems for me. Of course they are written in my own style but are very heavily influenced by your verses. A fact.. And I have 53 years writing and reading poetry under my belt.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/12/2021 4:15:00 PM
I think it is a proven fact, my writing is extraordinarily substandard, far beneath yours Sir Lindley. I am therefore not a true writer yet, nor a true poet - yet...I shall keep on writing nevertheless, not to be thwarted. We all make way for improvements here. ;) xx
Date: 6/12/2021 1:16:00 PM
My friend, remember this, Keats was not regarded with any real favor or flavor while he was alive. Only later when time and fate allowed a different multitude to read and understand his brilliance did he gain that which was always his due! Same basically was true of Emily Dickinson. To those that know- your poetry stands the test of time. A fav- a gem ..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/12/2021 4:17:00 PM
True. Most are enjoyed posthumously. Some are closer to receiving that acknowledgement than others. Thank you for your kind thoughts.
Date: 6/12/2021 2:38:00 AM
"Top 100 Poems of All Time". ;) x
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/12/2021 2:46:00 AM
Are you kidding me? What a rort. Stay tuned... https://www.poetrysoup.com/poems/top_100_poems_all_time.aspx
Date: 6/12/2021 2:29:00 AM
Giant.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 6/12/2021 2:29:00 AM
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Date: 6/12/2021 2:27:00 AM
Seconded Away.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/12/2021 2:27:00 AM
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Date: 6/11/2021 3:27:00 PM
"I lost myself once and on my way back up from the bottom, I saw my name written across the sky and all the reasons why I was worthy of this climb. The sky broke open harder than I ever did to show me that the strongest things break apart sometimes to learn about the grace of letting go, the strength of rising back up, and the beauty of finding yourself again. Now I say, I never lost myself at all, I was simply going through the process, of bringing myself back home to me."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/11/2021 3:30:00 PM
"You can't help but love what you love. There are just some people you can't help loving, and it doesn't matter what they've said or haven't said, done or haven't done, because you will love them anyway. Love cannot be explained, there is no reasoning with it; and sometimes that kind of love, may be the truest form of love that exists."
Date: 6/11/2021 9:53:00 AM
We live through the pain on tear at a time as we strive to find our happiness.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/11/2021 3:24:00 PM
X.
Date: 6/9/2021 2:09:00 AM
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Date: 6/9/2021 2:43:00 AM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/9/2021 2:36:00 AM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/9/2021 2:18:00 AM
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Date: 6/8/2021 6:34:00 AM
A very strong sentiment Leanne! Never let those loon eaters see you cry. Love this one!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/9/2021 2:08:00 AM
X.
Date: 6/7/2021 5:30:00 AM
“Some stories have to be written because no one would believe the absurdity of it all.”
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Date: 6/7/2021 5:27:00 AM
“Some people are in such utter darkness that they will burn you just to see a light. Try not to take it personally.”
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Date: 6/7/2021 5:26:00 AM
“Often people that say they “don’t care” actually do. The moment they discuss you with their friends and family, compete with you, bad mouth you to others or react to anything you do or say is when they give themselves away. You can either be saddened or flattered that you effected someone so much. The perspective is yours to determine.”
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Date: 6/7/2021 3:33:00 AM
1999. Sinner/Neil Finn. Lullabies.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/7/2021 3:35:00 AM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/7/2021 3:33:00 AM
LYRICS/ "Sinner", Neil Finn. https://genius.com/Neil-finn-sinner-lyrics
Date: 6/7/2021 2:30:00 AM
Seconded Away.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/7/2021 2:30:00 AM
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Date: 6/7/2021 1:37:00 AM
Black Dog Barks.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/7/2021 1:38:00 AM
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Date: 6/7/2021 1:36:00 AM
The Lewis Trap.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/7/2021 1:37:00 AM
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