My Life

Mother of three Widowed at 22

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Sue Mason

Date: 12/2/2008 3:31:00 PM

Are you entering this into the 6-word contest that Mark Cotterman is doing? Powerful words reflecting a powerful woman. I was left with a son at age 27 so I cannot imagine how difficult Life must be for someone with three!! even though I'm sure they bring you great joy! Thank you so much for your welcome comment on my blog. Glad you're at the Soup!!

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 12/2/2008 2:10:00 AM

hey hey hey..... an amazing stuff.....! wow! thou rock, thy words are exquisite, wouldst lovest to readst more .... this piece is overwhelming, literally! It speaks about you.... your whole life.....! keep writing fathima.... love and peace and care... AMAAN! :)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/1/2008 5:27:00 PM

I haven't read you in a minute and I am sorry because I have missed some good writes. This is so strong. You make me want to create a story about this mother of three. My juices are flowing ..lol..hope all is well with you..I do so enjoy your work.

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/30/2008 2:48:00 AM

Oh this made my heart cry out. I'm so sorry! This tells me the whole tale. But God's always there. Blessings to you and yours, Chitra

Laurie Ginn

Date: 11/29/2008 6:37:00 AM

Reading this is just overwhelming. I pray you have support around you. God bless you and your children. Laurie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/29/2008 6:16:00 AM

So sorry for such a devastating loss. This sadly says so much. Good luck if it is for the contest. Love, Shar