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My Father's Promise

I don't want the rags to riches I don't want a brand new car and you can have the cozy comforts I don't need them by far I'll trade my earthly treasures for the streets of solid gold God will take this broken body worn and torn as it grows old I don't want the daily living with my body racked with pain but I'll take my Father's promise cause I'll have so much more to gain...

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Robert Pettit

Date: 5/1/2021 4:55:00 PM

Nicely written with great rhyming. I would like to see you posting new material.

Doris Bounds
Date: 6/29/2021 7:13:00 PM

Thank you Robert,have not been in here lately,as I paint and been caught up in fulfilling orders,but your kind words are a blessing.....

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/18/2020 9:41:00 AM

Enjoyed your verse Doris, earthly riches are worthless because you cant take them withyou. But riches await those who are faithful to God. Tom

Doris Bounds
Date: 9/21/2020 4:21:00 PM

Hello Tom thank you for your kind words,nothing here on earth could compare to what we have coming,in my Father's House there are meany mansions....