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My Father's Footsteps

I can see you up ahead of me I am following in your footsteps no matter how fast I walk I cannot catch up your footsteps are bigger than mine but they were warm and safe to step in you turn around and smile encouragingly then return to your journey thank you for your footsteps when I can no longer see you they will always be here pointing me in the right direction Dora Roimata Langsbury 27 June 2009 Written for my father, Kuao Langsbury, for his 75th birthday gift.

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Date: 2/28/2016 9:11:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:02:00 PM
enjoyed reading your poem again... SKAT
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Date: 6/29/2013 4:05:00 PM
Hi Dora, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:56:00 PM
Dora, a wonderful tribute poem. ... enjoyed dropping by :-) -WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side. Hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/27/2013 11:39:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup!!! A perfect gift to your father!!! Beautifully written. Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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