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My Eyes, Your Dream

From my vision came your dreams Burning out like the boiling colourless steam With a sweet flavour of the white vanilla cream Playing on in auto, like the unstoppable theatre film dripping out of my orbits, like beam Behold the great beautiful trim That which cleanse away all the grim Your aim to be able to kill the squirrel hake It still stays in my vision in hale Gushing with such gusto, never pale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/30/2016 10:48:00 AM
Hi White Sage, you are keeping up with the excellent poetry. To me Love is the dream, the ultimate, your words as always sing in Dream's valleys. May your dreams ever sing onto the page. A seven my friend....Vladislav.
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White Sage
Date: 1/30/2016 11:17:00 AM
thanks Vladislav, I really appreciate that
Date: 1/5/2016 9:08:00 AM
Nice write on this poem!
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Date: 1/5/2016 11:10:00 AM
thanks Hansteven
Date: 1/3/2016 6:49:00 PM
Great write WS, so deep and meaningful. I especially liked the first line, "From my vision came your dreams" beautiful. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thanks Caryl, am glad you liked it...
Date: 12/30/2015 6:06:00 PM
Such an deep and breath taking poem my friend , loved it happy new year and hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:19:00 PM
said you loved it, makes me feel good...HNY
Date: 12/29/2015 11:25:00 PM
Hi Shehu, wow, that dream rapidly changed into a nightmare... awesome write... LINDA
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:27:00 AM
hello Linda, thanks...though like a nightmare it is, i feel safer in it

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