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My Dream Girl

My dream girl's not a doll, no Kewpie cutie, Or an heiress, or an actress on the screen. She's neither nun nor acrobat, Nor wears fine feathers in her hat, No frump for Trump Republican, No beauty queen. She's not a princess trapped inside an ivory palace Awaiting rescue by a valiant knight like me. She doesn't dazzle like aurora borealis, Or sing arias from "Carmen" like Ms. Callas, Or practice taekwondo, Or even know tai chi. But the girl I dream about has joy and laughter, And her heart's as full of love as it can be. When my spirit's low, she lifts it to the rafter, And I know we'll have a happily ever after Every time I dream of her And she of me.

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Date: 6/17/2024 8:12:00 AM
Actually, she sounds like a Trump supporter. Lol. May you find your dream girl, and/or happiness.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/17/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, Hilda. What? A Trump supporter...why, I wouldn't dream of it.
Date: 6/15/2024 4:07:00 PM
Sounds likes a lovely lady Jim!! Nice poem….Debx
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/16/2024 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Deb. She is...at least in my dreams.
Date: 6/15/2024 1:40:00 PM
Awww sweet fantasy. Mine does all that and more
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/16/2024 9:22:00 AM
You're lucky, Tom...and thanks.
Date: 6/15/2024 10:23:00 AM
Nice poem Mr. Slaughter - very effective rhyme scheme. I can't remember seeing that one before.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/15/2024 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, David. I didn't realize there was a "rhyme scheme". I just go where my Muse tells me to go.

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