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My Deathless Love

It has gone on for far too long. Lightning will smite me for my wrong. On my honor, I gave all that I could, Vicious fate will still get me; I knew that it would. Even now, you gaze at me with shimmering eyes; Yearning, I hide from those azure skies. Open arms forced to stay at each side, Unworthy Casanova, swallow love as pride! Kindness that I never deserved, shall soon depart- Run away! Run far from this fool’s heart. Instead of your man, I could be your brother, Somehow then fall as dumbly for another Touch you, I will not; never as I am touched, Ever in your hand a heart lays unclutched, Nevermore to care, roaming directionless and hurt. Only one can tell why I hold you close to me, Bringer of my sorry end, a light I cannot see. Raging passion held behind exhausted eyes, In a prison so deep you cannot hear its cries. Enchanting, your smile makes a pulse stop still. Not even I could destroy my love, nothing ever will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/5/2010 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup, Chris! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:48:00 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Chris. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 2:40:00 PM
Chris, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/10/2009 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Chris. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2008 3:17:00 PM
OMFG!!!! I love it sooooo much!!!!!
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Date: 11/12/2008 10:18:00 AM
wow this is an AMAZING poem I love how you express yourself. from Sierra
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