my darling boy -
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* REWRITE *
oh ...
have you seen my darling boy
blond hair, like corn silk, falling?
lost, his sparkling absinthe eyes
but still, my heart keeps calling
I thought I saw him run away
with a young girl, hand-in-hand
swallowed by the ocean mist
their footprints in the sand
oh, have you seen my darling boy
with a smile broad and bright?
seems he went a-wandering
in a full moon, late one night
while captured by his fancies
he's inclined to court a whim
so counting evening fireflies
would be grave concern for him
oh, have you seen my darling boy
with dreams and hopes anew?
he holds the mind to conquer
a kingdom, grand ... or two
and yet he'd rather spin you
tall tales that make you smile
wise anecdotes, adventurous
to charm you and beguile
oh, have you seen my darling boy
replete with loves and life?
he's apt to wink or tease you
suffused with virtue, rife
he's endeared to melancholy
yet he masks it with a laugh
his child's heart aches for others
but breaks on their behalf
oh, have you seen my darling boy?
he sings an impassioned tune
of swirling maelstroms, seas of suns
and the faces of the moon
he's oft' to feign a scoundrel
though he's chivalrous and kind
and loves to search a sunken heart
for the treasure he may find
oh, have you seen my darling boy?
no - I doubt you ever will
as I call to him across the years
but the air is hushed and still
so, tho' I've chased him, wide and far
I'm quite sure I'll never see
his corn silk hair and absinthe eyes
for that darling boy ...
was me.
( for the “Growing Up” Poetry Contest, Robert James Liguori, judge and sponsor )
Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2023
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