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My Country Pakistan

many young peoples don t know that freedom is the only way to go here ordinary tired people lies who aren t educated enough to realize that the country we have now wasn t always one that no matter how it is, Pakistan is still awesome it s flag is full of green and white the moon and the stars representing the light may our countries flag always furl high and remain bright as for this country, many people lost their lives, and we have it after a great fight it was once surrounded and ruled by Hindus a time when even the teaching of Allah was bang and many muslims were forced to convert and worship Vishnus a time when muslims weren t safe in their own homeland in congress rule, the call to prayer was bang anyone caught eating the cow was hang muslims condition was misearable nobody was doing anything although all of this was visible then from God came an angel yeah it was Jinnah who save muslims from all of this danger the emergence of Pakistan was no ordinary task it was a miracle it all started with a dream that Iqbal saw in which there was a promise of separate homeland a land where children play without care a place where human worship without fear a land where muslims are regarded as safe at that time, paradise was such a place for such a homeland, the name Pakistan was choosen which is the main purpose of our lives the name itself means, La Illah Ill Allah there is no God but Allah so it s our duty, to love our land whenever the country need us, we should also lend a hand don t be afraid to give up our lives as for this country many sacrifices were made they will never be dismayed may it s flag always remain high may it always remain safe from every single spy the whole world should say that Pakistan is a country full of talented guys may our country always remain azaad( independent) Pakistan Zindabad, Pakistan Zaindabad

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Date: 4/25/2018 7:53:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to your country Pakistan. No matter where you are from or what lands you were born in. We are all brothers and sisters my friend. There is also only one god, Allah or however the almighty one is said with a different tongue. Good Luck with your school project Farad...Nice write.....Charlie
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Date: 4/21/2018 7:17:00 AM
This is an AWESOME write, Faraz! From pictures I have seen, shared with me by friends who live in Pakistan, your country is a beautiful country. It's unfortunate there is corruption within its borders, as there seems to be rampant corruption throughout all countries of the world...
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 4/21/2018 7:18:00 AM
...We need to preserve and protect the sovereignty of all and every nation and each country's cultures, customs, beliefs, etc.. I am a gazillion percent AGAINST the NWO because its goal is to combine ALL nations under ONE, elitist rule. This cannot possibly be a good thing for humanity. God bless you. God bless Pakistan. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 3/29/2018 3:33:00 PM
Pakistan Zindabad!
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Date: 3/14/2018 12:08:00 PM
You have exquisitely beautifully described the features of your country. Let the spirit of the Pakistani patriots always be unbending and no enemy can defeat you!
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Date: 3/6/2018 3:31:00 AM
Pakistan Zindabad =D
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:07:00 PM
Hi Faraz , beautiful flow with great description of history and feeling ::))
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Date: 2/25/2018 12:30:00 AM
Hope you're school project was well received.. You expressed your feelings, and history very well. bbn
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Date: 2/24/2018 11:52:00 PM
A lovely super poem expressing fine patriotism and very interesting historical information mentioned. Yes the Muslims needed a separate land. And if they heeded to God truly they could live peacefully in self defense and in some cases revenge for unjust attacks on their lives and rights only. So thumbs up poet. Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 2/24/2018 2:02:00 PM
hi Fraz.............it is beautiful wirte about Pakistan history........Pakistan is our motherland and we are proud of such a beautiful land ............it shows your love to the homeland
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Date: 2/19/2018 5:40:00 AM
I have never been to Pakistan, but it sounds a wonderful place, home to you and home is where the heart is. We all seek a Paradise, where we all can live in peace, there is too much emphasis put on cast and creed unfortunately today. Peace is what we should all be striving for. Love not War. You have created a very nice poem here. Well done....Maria
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 2/22/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thanks alot for your friendly visit
Date: 2/16/2018 9:24:00 AM
I do not know your country’s politics but have met wonderful people from your country. Good luck with your project.
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 2/16/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thanks alot for your wonderful comment
Date: 2/15/2018 10:44:00 AM
may your all wish come true! I will be very happy to see your country's development.I wish same for Pakistan.
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/16/2018 10:08:00 AM
Water under the bridge!
Date: 2/15/2018 7:20:00 AM
- A great writing about your country, Faraz ... of course we are proud of our country and flag ... although most countries have both positive and negative sides .... Home Sweet Home :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2018 6:53:00 AM
Iqbal was a great poet, however I feel his vision has not been implanted by the governments of Pakistan.. Even Jinnah would not be happy with the corruption today.. A patriotic write Faraz..
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 2/15/2018 6:55:00 AM
Glad to know that you are aware of Pakistan s situation, we again need someone like Jinnah to finish all of this corruption, I have basically written this poem for my school project, let s wish that my school like it

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