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My Chickie Doodle Girl

MY Chickie Doodle Girl * * * * * * * * * * * She`s four going on 40, this child/woman girl, A true gem from the deep blue ocean, I`m the oyster and she`s my pearl. Her bewilderment and fascination, her audacity and grit blows me to smithereens every time I think of it. Her bedroom a museum of things you do not touch, of nick-knacks and trinkets from ages birth and on up. Her stubbornness and humanity, her temper and her trust, changes from minute to minute, “Dear God, give me strength to keep up”. She`s expressive and animated, with an abundance of humor and wit, Her insight is abounding, there`s just no end to it. Her devotion runs deep, it`s an unconditional thing, She`s absolutely remarkable this small human being. Shes got moxie, and attitude, and character, Oh Man!, and SHE is my daughter, and I Love Her With All That I Am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2016 5:30:00 PM
Very nice I'm not a mom yet but this so reminds me of my little niece who I adore.
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Date: 4/30/2016 4:05:00 PM
My daughter is three, and I completely get this write. Little girls are the absolute best! 7 from me.
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Date: 4/28/2016 12:31:00 PM
Very nice, Ellen. It reminds me of my children and grandchildren when they were little. Yes, we love them with all that we are.
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:25:00 PM
Ellen, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:19:00 PM
Ellen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:59:00 AM
This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. Welcome to poetry soup
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