Murphy's Law: REVISED UPDATE

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Poetic Form: Dramatic Verse

Inspired: 2024 August 26

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*NOTE subtleties emphasized in their articulate closures contain a quantum message. I think we're in trouble mate why, what's wrong I saw the pilot reading a manual was it how to land a plane in a storm no, how to fly one ???---!. there's no life preservers on this ship, mate I heard this captain say that the ship has a full complement on board so what does that mean well after the ship sinks we'll just sit tight with no life preservers there'll be plenty just wait a while give or take ... !

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/27/2024 2:20:00 AM

hmm, was Murphy onboard mate?

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2024 11:44:00 AM

My new blocking app went into overload last night, and I slept on the matter as a cure-all. Quantumly refreshed I opened the app and found the on switch for my email app, but it's a friendly site, and found all apps blocked and the button to unblock all instead of one-by-one. I realized its military properties of following its orders as a blocker--friend or foe. I'll answer you in my next quantum.