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Mr and Mrs :Nature's Bestowal

Mr. Sun and Mrs.Moon Wedded before million of years ago whence our planet was unfaltering Even whilst differing prodigiously: in age ,size & their origin They demonstrate a wonderful couple Everyday he persuades her with his rays alike soothing feather. and shares his love light to her. She reacts by reflecting back to us. He wakes up in the morning to find her to have fallen drowsy. Observing that he gives her rest, so that she could be much awake to do her night onus. Hide-and-seek is their favourite game. Day and night shifts are their aim. He is a star and she is a particle of rock and dust. Nevertheless they are pleased with each other's beauty at best. Sighting her sound sleep he is always cautious not to trouble her.. Instead adores her beauty from a farther distance. When the sun makes out with moon: Occurs the birth of eclipses. 25-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Note:The sun and the moon poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/26/2020 5:31:00 PM

Hello Deepa, this is a wonderful tale in poetry. I have enjoyed it. have a nice evening my friend.

V. Deepa
Date: 5/28/2020 7:08:00 AM

Yes ma'am I always speak truth. I will always say.. you are my first motivator in poetry soup site. Love you.Take care:-):-)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/27/2020 7:56:00 AM

Hello Deepa, Thank you for such a lovely comment. Yes I enjoyed this piece that you wrote. Enjoy your day my friend.

V. Deepa
Date: 5/27/2020 5:38:00 AM

Hello mam, I always cherish when you be my first comment.:-):-) Thankyou for your love,support and blessings:-).I am excited to know that you enjoyed this work. Have a nice day mam.Take care.