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Mother's Hand

Loving was mother’s hand that convinced me to understand To give was better to than to receive, this I do believe For life is no bed of roses for a weary head that opposes What man unjustly delivers even to trusting givers. Compassion was mother’s rule, to never be cruel Or make fun of others including sisters and brothers Get along even if you are wrong, it will make you strong For good is might, be polite and don’t fight, no matter who’s right. Mother’s hand was gentle and kind that would often remind When you stepped out of line with a swat on your behind She loved you still even until her days’ end she did fulfill Never to forget her affection and her bonding connection. Often mother would make me laugh for my sake on her behalf When I was down and out she turned my world about Made me smile even for a while, with her words she did beguile Stern with a heart made of gold, never cold, a perfect mold. She often guided my dream whether or not it was extreme Letting me decide before I tried and before my worlds did collide Getting me to see what was there for me and what could be If I took the road where rivers flowed and avoid carrying a heavy load. Mother instilled a character of kindness without social blindness Always respect the older generation they are our foundation They had interesting stories to tell that would impel a lasting relation With such imagination and non-stop conversation with no reservation. Mother’s hand is with me still, to this day until we meet again Her thoughts follow my heart, in my art; I know we are never apart Her words are what I write; she’s never far, or out of sight She has left these gifts for free, so others can see her soul in me. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Second Place Winner ~ "Life's Personal Impressive Meanings” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Freeman April 1, 2010

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Date: 4/1/2010 7:08:00 PM
A fine tribute to mother. Congrats for the win
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:03:00 PM
Your mother sounded as if she was such a guiding influence in your life...How wonderful to grow up under her care. What a lovely poem. Congratulations on this wonderful piece, Caryl. Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:40:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your 2nd place win in Moses contest.. an excellent write and special win for u my friend...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/1/2010 11:31:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your mother and her loving hands, Caryl. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2010 10:57:00 AM
A loving mother's hand(spiritually) you captured most aptly Caryl.I wept at my grandmother's wake, when I looked at her natural hands, and thought of all the loving things she had done for me as a boy. Fried chicken, pies she made especally for me.'CONGRATULATIONS" Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/1/2010 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this very deserving write. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/23/2010 10:48:00 AM
so beautiful, glad you had such a wonderful mother.
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Date: 3/23/2010 10:40:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Caryl. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. The best to you in John's contest. Love, Carol
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