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Morning Whispers Collaboration With Brenda Chiri

Taking in all the beauty of this sunny brand new day As squirrels scurry about, caught up in their play Watching brilliant colors blend together up in the skies A soft gentle breeze whispers Good Morning in silky sweet sighs amidst the threads of autumn trees i listen as the morning speaks a sigh within its silky breath rustles through the leaves within its golden branches nested squirrels arise in play beneath horizon's serenade

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Curtis Moorman

Date: 9/18/2019 3:54:00 PM

Sandra, what a beautiful collaboration -- and it is with one of Soup's most loved poets. I follow Brenda's postings and marvel at her ability to draw the reader into the topic regardless of what she is writing about. I see you have the same ability.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Curtis, what a sweet thing to say...Brenda pens beautifully :) it was a fun write!

Chris Green

Date: 9/17/2019 7:03:00 AM

What a beautiful collaboration between to of the sites best poets. You both have created an image in your own style which means we, the readers, get double the beauty in one place. Bravo to both of you.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/17/2019 8:51:00 AM

What a kind thing to say! Thank you my friend :) hugs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/16/2019 5:52:00 AM

Beautiful - together ya'll excelled in lovely flowing lines that sparkle. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/16/2019 11:29:00 AM

Thank you...was a fun little write....:) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/14/2019 9:24:00 PM

Wonderful collaboration, penned by two special poets. Loved how you two worked this one out. Best wishes, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 5:26:00 PM

Thank you my friend! :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 9/14/2019 3:47:00 PM

The silky sweet sighs gave it away, just read Brenda's poem so I know she did the first and obviously Sandy the second. Either way it was seamless and beautiful congrats to you both!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 6:40:00 PM

Thanks John, sometimes my muse responds to another's poem,or even a comment upon my page... i think i mused something as a reply to one of yours recently...' :) hugs

Judy Ball

Date: 9/14/2019 1:24:00 PM

A lovely Fall poem . Excellent imagery . God Bless, JB

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 6:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Judy :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2019 11:11:00 AM

I enjoyed listening to these morning whispers..they blend so seamlessly, which means the two of you were listening to each other's rhythms. Both talented writers..I can't tell who wrote what. But if I had to guess, at the risk of being wrong---Brenda wrote the first stanza..Sandy wrote the second. Kudos to both.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 1:17:00 PM

you my friend seem to know our writing styles enough to know who penned what, as you are correct :) Thank you! hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/14/2019 8:43:00 AM

Yea I love it! Two poets describing the same thing in their own way! Perfect! Thank you Sandy it was eye opening yet such fun!;) love your style!:)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/16/2019 11:31:00 AM

both sets are equally beautiful from two different muses and blend well together :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/14/2019 8:55:00 AM

You did so beautifully! I happen to love your words better than my own!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 8:51:00 AM

It was a joy to take your beautifully painted scene and try to paint it as well ... :) hugs