Morning Hair

I don't know why, You may think i'm weird, but the sexiest thing I can think of, has to be morning hair. You know the kind of freakish fro in the mornings, that flops all around, when your eye's are falling out, almost hitting the ground. Then a mighty yawn, and bits start to stick out, like you been electrocuted, like you hair just wants to shout. (Car wash wooh wooh wooh wooh wooh At the car wash yeah... ) It's both amusing and sexy for me, to see your hair so naturally, I know it's hard to believe, that I find morning hair so dang sexy... Contest: SEXY! - By nette onclaud 2/2/2012 M.Mahauariki © 2012 3rd place
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:08:00 AM
MURRAY,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:44:00 PM
breathless, breathless, murray!... congrats on your win in my contest!:) huggs
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:03:00 PM
congrats on a very nice write and win in Nette's contest.
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:44:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Sexy" contest Murray. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations Murray on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 2/10/2012 9:49:00 AM
I am smiling at the twist you took the contest in your own unique way! Sexy morning hair.....love that idea! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/10/2012 8:46:00 AM
congrats Murray on an exciting win for this sexy submission luv..
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Date: 2/10/2012 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations Murray xx
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Date: 2/2/2012 10:07:00 AM
Nice poem Murray. Just one little thing: in the third line of your first verse, get rid of "most". You don't need it.
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 2/2/2012 10:38:00 AM
thank you diz done, an yeah it's does sound better. muzz
Date: 2/1/2012 7:17:00 PM
funny and sexy....
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 2/1/2012 9:57:00 PM
Well if you cant taken em at there worst, you don't deserve them at there best...
Date: 2/1/2012 5:36:00 PM
Good luck with your entry. You do have a weird sense of sexy if you ask me.
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 2/1/2012 5:39:00 PM
lol... oh well, I never did like being a conformist... and I needed a laugh... Muzz
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