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......................................Sadly I heard my mother Groan Look how tall my son has Grown Poor little lamb what have you Heard? Is the big bad wolf hiding in the Herd? Now come and see the most amazing Feat I will walk on my hands instead of my Feet At the ball game sitting on the third Tier The TWINS LOSE I shed a joyful Tear Yesterday I had a dream, a dream so Real Caught a Six pound trout with a Zebco Reel Inspired by a comment on “Hodgepodge POETRY” Dedicated To Raul Moreno Give it a try my POETIC Friend

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Date: 2/15/2012 10:54:00 PM
Very witty one; I like your hodgepodges!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/15/2012 10:55:00 PM
always, Laura
Date: 5/7/2009 9:36:00 AM
Another very creative WRITE/ I'm sure if Raul tries, he'll get it RIGHT. Have a great day. Vince
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:58:00 AM
This is wonderful, HG! Raul is an awesome poet with a giving heart! I love your creative use of Homonyms in this delightful read! Thank you for your thoughtful words! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/23/2009 2:51:00 PM
HG--The Twins have to win not lose! Hey what's up here. Got a good chuckle out of this. It serves me right for mentioning that I'm a Twins' fan. Keep your sense of humor and keep those poems coming. Thanks for your kind comment on my poem. Karen
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Date: 3/23/2009 1:58:00 PM
This is so cool, awesome write thanks for sharing, it's very clever and well written, Blessings ~Michaela~
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Date: 3/23/2009 12:09:00 PM
You can change the eighth line to TWIN's for me. I hope they will have another competitive season. Enjoyed your clever use of rhyme. Nice dedication to a wonderful writer and kind person. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 3/23/2009 3:27:00 AM
Really cute and clever... ~ Arany
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Date: 3/23/2009 3:13:00 AM
Oh you have been having some fun today. Great job HG
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Date: 3/22/2009 3:50:00 PM
Excellent write my friend, the second stanza is my favorite. I will give it a try for fun. Thanks for the dedication...Raul
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Date: 3/22/2009 1:18:00 PM
Crazy, wild poetry! I know how you love those Red Sox and I love fishing! Fun to read dear brother! Still haven't found out much about that other site. No one seems to know! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 3/22/2009 11:51:00 AM
Well done , HGDE , clever piece . I'm now at peace !!! ....
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Date: 3/22/2009 8:10:00 AM
Very clever and impressive rhyming my friend! My favourite couplet HAS to be the fourth... I'm a RABID Red Sox Fan!! Great job!!! Best wishes, Keith
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