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More Bread and Butter Please

More bread and butter please — man has needs that can be satisfied. As he rumbles down the aisles, he handles his affairs with pride. Shopping’s his specialty — A sizzling offering to his bride 7/25/2020 Modern Sijo 45 syllables

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2020 5:08:00 AM

You might have written this in tribute to my husband who is the only one brave enough to go into a store. I have not been inside a store since February.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2020 6:26:00 PM

I rarely go. It is always an experience! So strange. Stay safe. Find joy in the little things.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/27/2020 6:07:00 AM

Very...appetizing and well expressed, Sijo , dearest , Kim. Hugs xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2020 1:57:00 PM

Thank you!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/26/2020 12:04:00 AM

We don't need palaces and jewels, we need love and happiness and sufficient money to be able to live on. Great write my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 3:47:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer! :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/25/2020 9:20:00 PM

Great Sijo Pangie xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 3:47:00 AM

Thanks dear Pangie! Hugs!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/25/2020 8:26:00 PM

Hi Kim, Like a senryu, your poem takes me everywhere, regarding the human race. I like the touch of the simple things in life, those that are to be treasured.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 3:48:00 AM

And certainly when we get down to it, the simple things are what matter. Hugs