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Miss Spanish Moss Maiden

Cascading ebony curls, weave her lean oak body, Gothic vines scatter mustard buds, clothing her Sultan figure, Fingers and appendages tangle in this mesh, Droop against her sleekness, Attemp to shun day`s life. Underneath, bats perch dormant, Spiders playfully weave, Snakes await lunch, Hypnotic Miss Spanish Moss Maiden.

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Sue Mason

Date: 5/23/2009 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful write with great imagery here, Robin. Been awhile since you've posted at the Soup!! Hope you return soon with more of You ... smile ...

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/21/2009 11:44:00 AM

love the image-- so God like fantastic write

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/21/2009 6:25:00 AM

Descriptive poem! Vince

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 4/19/2009 11:10:00 AM

well written. interesting words in your writing... Hugs and smiles!

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/18/2009 7:08:00 PM

wonderful imagery. this is so impressive. nice job

P Sheart

Date: 3/27/2009 11:20:00 AM

Hi Robin Wow this is really full of deep sentiments. Since a chick a dee I've always had a fear of spiders. Truly enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patricia

John Rhinem

Date: 3/25/2009 11:54:00 AM

Ahh, taking on the imanative visionary of a plants daily life; of a perscriptve perhaps give!? And turning into your masterful thoughts, expressions and well written words....and doing so within such an imagery and wonderful way I would say dear Robin!? Wonderful write of creativity I would say! Excellent job!:)

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/21/2009 2:25:00 AM

A beautiful picture here...but I'm with Sharon, bats, spiders, snakes...I'll watch from afar! lol love, Kristin

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/20/2009 7:12:00 PM

I like your version of Spanish moss I just wrote one about the same subject the other day. Very descriptive indeed! Great use of imagery! Laura

Ann T.

Date: 3/20/2009 3:59:00 PM

I read most of your poems and you have such a great way of pulling them together at the very end... I think it is the hardest thing to do.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/20/2009 3:26:00 PM

Laura recently write a poem about Spanish Moss and I looked it up and saw pics of it for the very first time. It is indeed hypnotic and beautiful in such a rare way. Spiders and bats huh, well, nice to look at from afar. Awesome write. Love, shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/20/2009 10:04:00 AM

This is brilliant writing my friend..I just love this entire piece that speaks loudly..cascading ebony curls..long aok body..beautiful way of painting this..her vines scatter...you really brough this life..well done.