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the bane … of complacency the enemy of apathetic ids an all-consuming blade of inspiration you, mighty weapon have slain the fiercest dragons of detachment and disregard that humanity has brought against you and I, a knight of notation, wield you with an authority graced to me by a vivid imagination and a child’s whimsical heart … oh, I do not take your might for granted nor underestimate your license … I remove you from your scabbard in deepest consideration - your hilt, I grasp with awe your edge, I apply in deference and fear for the wounds I affect are deep and lasting … you are the Excalibur of inspiration pulled from a stone of indifference by the grandest of acumens and spirits long, long ages ago … I take up your glyphic garland with pride and honor and an undying respect for the numberless warriors who came before me and whose names are a prayer upon these pious lips … a prayer for you … my pen. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, January 4, 2024

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Date: 1/25/2024 8:39:00 AM
Dear Gregory, your poem is like a battle cry! Your pen, Excalibur of inspiration, wielded with reverence and fear, showing us of the power and responsibility inherent in creativity. The knight of notation, adorned with awe and a child's heart – a beautiful image of the artist's duality. Your words stir a fire within, urging us to unsheathe our own tools and join the eternal dance of expression. A potent tribute, may your pen's edge always be guided by light. -Blessings, Daniel
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2024 9:53:00 AM
What a wonderfully inspiring and kind comment, Daniel, thank you so very much - you made my day! Blessings, my fellow warrior! :o)

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